This is really an awesome story. Not sure about Ziva, though, she seems to be jumping all over the place like a hyper flea. LOL. Have you considered finishing this story? I would love to see what happens with Clark, and with the Gibbs/Tony relationship.

I really hope you finish this story, you've done such a great job so far. You really did a great job with your portrayal of the characters, really spot on. Please continue the story! Diamond