Title: Reflections
Reviewer: steveg17 Signed
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I have read this story a couple times and I really enjoyed the outcome that you had written.
Listening to Gibbs thoughts, it's clear that it's not about Tony at all, it's all about Gibbs and his pride.
Ducky should have told Gibbs to leave his anger at home and remind him that they were the ones that had been in the wrong. They were the ones that treated Tony like he was useless and unwanted. Also telling Gibbs that saying he was sorry wasn't a sign of weakness, especially when they were in the wrong. But that is something Gibbs would never admit to
Jenny at least admitted she was part of the problem. But she was right when she pointed out that all of them had secrets and at least the secret Tony kept was because he was ordered to and not because he chose to keep secrets or lie to everyone else. That falls firmly with the rest of the team and Abby
Sure sounded like all Gibbs really cared about is himself. Abby and Ducky would be ticked off, Jenny smug Tim and Ziva dropping the ball. Besides, Gibbs had treated him like all the problems were Tony's fault and Also Tim and Ziva always and still do feel they are superior. And any exucse as to why Gibbs didn't contact him sooner won't wash as clearly Tony didn't try to hide himself. What it does scream is the fact that Tim,Ziva and Abby aren't half as smart as they believe and when it comes to the job, Tony it seems is really better than all of them combined. Information was there, they just really didn't bother to look
This has to be the best NCIS story I have ever read. It's absolutely amazing. :) ♥
That was awesome! Are you going to do a sequel?
That was great! So moving, and sad....I loved it.
I loved it! Great chapter....I can't wait for more.
Title: 19
Reviewer: Laeser Signed
I just caught up with the last few chapters. I'm so glad Gibbs and Tony have finally started to talk! I love the way you've got Gibbs finally realizing how uncaring he's been. I'm looking forward to see where you take the story. Please keep writing!
I really, really like this story and I'm very much looking forward to your next update. However, I find myself hoping that even after Tony resolves things with his NCIS team (if he does) that he stays in TX. It sounds like he's really made a home for himself there and it would be a shame for him to lost it. Thanks so much for sharing this with us!
Thanks for the update,please keep posting this great story.
I always look forward to this story being updated,looking forward to more chapters and to seeing if Gibbs and Joe acyually manage to get along or will there be plates a flyin.Julie
I really love it. Can't wait for the next part.
Don't know what will happen. On the one hand I want the old team back on the other hand has Tony such a good life with this new team...
Great story. Hope you continue soon.
excellent job with Jenny--really captures the dichotomy (inconsistencies) of the character. Also love how Tony handles the conversation.
You continue to do a wonderful job capturing emotions & voices with this story. It feels & plays in my imagination in a very real way. I love what you've changed & how Tony has grown; not to mention the addition of Joe & Levon.
Does a man good to be knocked down a peg or five and Gibbs needed it. Absolutely love the dialogue and character actions in this chapter--I can close my eyes and 'hear' what they're saying because it is so natural and realistic.
I am gleefully anticipating Lundy & Joe going after Shepard.
I'm re-reading the story, well, just because I can. This far in I'm struck yet again by how richly you paint the universe in your stories. I feel that I know these people so much more because you've given them life beyond the screen.
What I enjoy about this chapter is not just the well-written case/ambush action but because it so clearly tells the story of Tony's new life. I can clearly see from this, and the previous chapter when we learned he got the job, the interactions between he & his new co-workers; how healing his time with Joe & Levon has been. I like seeing how they all work, and play. Tony's musings about their after-hours camaraderie strikes so true--I can count on hand the number of times we have seen the NCIS team members interact outside of a case. It's kind of sad. Good thing there's fic like yours to fix it all. :-)
wow, talk about living in denial. Abby has realized a lot but she still doesn't have a clue. I like the views we're getting from the other characters, it lets us see where they are in their thinking & also how wrong the NCIS team still is about everything.
I love the twist you added here regarding Tony & the American Cinema class. Perfect. And I'm sad because I had a similar twist in a story I'm working on, though who knows when it'll go anywhere other than my hd. :-D Nice to know I can think of something you already came up with.
Still loving the story. I'm looking forward to getting back to Tony though.
Title: Reflections
Reviewer: kaleecat Signed
I'm so happy to see a new story from your imagination. I'm not familiar with HK, beyond a wacky centaur AU, but you've very nicely set up who Joe & Levon are & their role in Tony's life. This is a great point to pick up Tony's need for a change--one that not many authors have recognized. The entire first half of that season, up to this episode, was really one blow after another for Tony. The lack of acknowlegment for what he did to rescue gibbs & maddie, not to mention the danger given his health history really pissed me off.
I'm looking forward to seeing how this au develops, learning more about joe & levon, and discovering just who Tony will end up with. I have no problem with Tony/omc, so I'm rather excited by the possibilities. And by the prospect of more of your wonderful writing.
I am enjoying this story very much and i am very much looking forward to reading more.Julie
Great story i will look forward to reading more soon.Julie
YAY! So loving this! Gads, I thought Gibbs got the fact that Levon and Joe were lovers earlier. He's still got his head up his ass, but he's getting better. Great job!
Wow. Just got caught up on this story today and you've got me choked up. I can feel Tony's hurt and confusion as well as Gibbs' guilt and it's just written so wonderfully! Gads. Lovely! Really great job!