Great story, I love how you are portraying everyone and the dynamics they have together. I'm curious what will happen when Tony eventually learns who Gibbs really is and that Abby played a part of setting him up. I'm really looking forward to reading more of where this story is going and what will happen to the others like the slacking Vivian.

I am enjoying this story and hope for a fast update :)

I like the subtle way you have Tony discovering things about himself. A slow realization rather than being forced to acknowledge it after the fact. I'm looking forward to seeing how he evolves. Thanks for writing such a great story and sharing it with us.

Happy to see this installment posted. Just to refresh I went back and read three(still as steamy as the first read). Eagerly aaiting the next.

Ok I am really liking this, hope you are a fast writer. Nice feel for pace and dialog.

Yay! You are back! I love Part Five. It’s HOT and I’ve too reread the other ones. Paul seems to be a really nice friend of Tony. I like him. Please update soon.

I really love this story. I'm curious how this story will go on. Please update!

I loved it right from the start. This story is thrilling. I so badly want to know how it will continue, hope I don't have to wait for too long :-)

Careen,thank you so much for your kindly worded feedback. I'm pleased that you appear pleased that I'm 'back'... Since part four didn't actually have Gibbs and DiNozzo together, but merely reflecting on their last meeting and anticipating their next, I'm absolutely delighted that you still found it HOT! - Hopefully, after reading the next part, you'll find the 'temperature' rising!!! Paul is a truly nice guy who's feeling protective of his new friend and looking out for him. Initially I had only meant for him, Mark, James and Zach, to be club buddies, but I've a feeling that Paul is going to become more involved in the actual plot.

I've just taken some time away from writing Part Five to amend the formatting of this segment on NCIS Fanfiction Archive. Unfortunately, it was probably not in time for your reading of it! That being the case, I'm even more appreciative of your kind comments. - Thank you

can't wait for the next chapter its good so far

I loved this from the beginning and you have me totally hooked. Hope that we don't have to wait too long for an update.

Really enjoying the story, can't wait for the next chapter.

I love this story! We need more.

I'm intrigued and looking forward to the next chapter