Reviews For Akiva (protect, shelter)
Wow well that was a good one i kinda felt that ziva was a teeny bit not zivaish but i loved every word. Well done sweetie good job. lotsa love xxxxx C
Date: 10/15/2009 1:34 [Report This]
Please work more on your stories before posting!!!!
There is no need to churn out chapter after chapter before they're ready. Get rid of all your mistakes, work on your dialog.
Date: 06/07/2009 13:54 [Report This]