Good. Surprising back story for Jethro.
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Date: 03/08/2018 2:20 [Report This]
I would try to read this but I can't, you REALLY need to double spade between lines. Not, mind you for the same line/paragraph, but certainly with dialog. if you edit this accordingly I would be happy to give it a try.
Date: 12/17/2011 7:07 [Report This]
Nice chapter! I'm afraid I had forgotten the details of the story and had to re-read it - whew!
Tony and Gibbs have a lovely dynamic in this story - I look forward to more!
Date: 07/23/2011 11:10 [Report This]
Yay, a new chapter! I really love this story, the spot-on characterization, Abby the stepdaughter, the fun and most of all the humor! Though I only discovered your story last november, I've read it more than once already, and I always always have to grin and to sigh sappy-ly (ok, that is probably not a real word ;o)) and to giggle and to laugh out loud - and I'm always finishing with a big smile in the end! Thank you for that, and thank you for updating!
Date: 01/21/2011 7:54 [Report This]
areally , really GOOD update....i soooooooo looking forward to the next one....the thanksgiving one....that should be something else.
alisa
Date: 07/23/2011 5:24 [Report This]
another wonderful chapter....good for TIBBS, they handled themselves VERY WELL....and it seems, abby did as well.
looking forward to more.
alisa
Date: 04/10/2011 18:53 [Report This]
great chapter....glad to see this is back.
keep it coming, please.
alisa
Date: 10/19/2010 0:21 [Report This]
love it cant wait to find out the reactions when it all comes out...
Date: 01/21/2010 23:39 [Report This]
"The boy is sprawled across the bed with one arm wrapped around the pillow looking for all the world as if he’s merely asleep."
This is an absolutely amazing descriptive sentence - very nicely done. I've just come across this story, and am trying to catch up with the chapters. It's very enjoyable so far, and I like the cases you're weaving in. The one thing that's thrown me off a bit is your use of present tense instead of past, but I'm getting used to that too.
Date: 04/11/2011 8:57 [Report This]
Thank you for teaching me something today. I looked up Charles B. McVey III, as I wondered who he was when mentioned in your story. A fascinating and tragic story, and still a miscarriage of justice.
Date: 01/21/2011 12:03 [Report This]
[grins] This is a delightful story. Please continue. I look forward to more. I love the dynamics and plot of this story. You're doing a great job.
Date: 08/02/2009 9:59 [Report This]
You are doing a wonderful job with this story. Thank you for sharing it with the rest of us.
Date: 02/27/2010 23:50 [Report This]
Still enjoying this story and can't wait for the next update.
Date: 10/11/2009 10:20 [Report This]
Another great chapter. Can't wait to read more, I am really enjoying this story.
Date: 09/16/2009 9:51 [Report This]
Really enjoyed the update, can't wait to read more. Love how this is going.
Date: 09/01/2009 11:45 [Report This]
Another wonderful chapter. Love how this story is progressing. Can't wait for more.
Date: 08/20/2009 23:29 [Report This]
Glad Ziva doesn't seem to have a problem with Gibbs and Tony. This was a great chapter, so happy for the update. Can't wait to read more.
Date: 08/13/2009 20:16 [Report This]
Yay another update!!! Really enjoyed this chapter. Loved Gibbs telling Jenny that he's happy, glad Tony got to do a little claiming, and can't wait to read about Tony's reaction to McGee's book. Looking forward to the next update.
Date: 08/04/2009 12:24 [Report This]
Really glad for the update. Could totally see McGee's expression as Abs popped up calling Gibbs "Pop" and then leaving with Tony for lunch. Can't wait to read more, really enjoying this story.
Date: 07/26/2009 11:59 [Report This]
I really enjoy reading this story and was glad with the A/N at the end. I don't think that Tony and Gibbs should end up with his brother/sister, but it would be nice if Tony could come to terms with possibly being friends with them, as Gibbs suggested. Thanks for the update--can't wait to read more.
Date: 07/24/2009 13:38 [Report This]
Really liking this story and looking forward to more .
Date: 07/18/2009 13:58 [Report This]
Really interesting and fun to read. Looking forward to reading more soon.
Date: 07/14/2009 11:05 [Report This]
I love this story, can't wait to see where you go with it!
Date: 07/15/2009 1:45 [Report This]
glad to see you've picked this story up again
Date: 04/15/2010 17:19 [Report This]