This was neat. I was glad that you chose the genre you did, not many people mix the supernatural with NCIS. This was very well written and I like the way he turned Tony. It was well thought out and I like the other vampire names. Smiles. Keep up the good work.

Very powerful. I liked how you changed or threw out most of the traditional rules to make it work, it was done really well. The only thing it really needs is a sequel, or second chapter. There are so many unanswered questions left, plus the whole "King" aspect. This could easily be a multi-chapter story, that I would love to follow. Please write more!! Diamond

Hi Xanthe, OMG!! What a incredibly intriguing story! That it'd be good was a given, after all you are the author.. But I'm afraid you made the mistake of opening up a viewhole to another universe where we will want to know more off! Too many hints and foreshadowings... So I fully expect to see more of your Vampire Universe! Congrats and 'till next time, Carli

I absolutely loved it :)