i KNEW vance would react that way....of course, he'd want someone like tim & ziva in the agency....he think, gibbs & tony are too "old" school for times we're living in. keep it coming. alisa

super start....as i've said before: gibbs has taught his jr. agents how NOT to respect tony as SFA...but, he would NEVER do what those 2 did. those 2 are just lucky, that the injury wasn't life threatening. can't wait to see the meeting between gibbs & vance...that should be something else.....knowing vance, he'll think tony deserved to be shot in the arse. keep it coming. alisa

This is wonderful.

Very Very good. I loved how Vance discovered all the positive things in Tony's file. Please keep writing.

I love this story. I can hardly wait for more. Thank you for a wonderful story. Please keep writing.

What a wonderful start. I love what you are writing. Please please please write more soon.

:O D: Oh my god, what a cool start! And a Cliffhanger... X( God, please write on, soon, please! Just like the other comment says, they really act like children, also in the show and I also can see something like this happen.

Sorry, I meant to say 'Team Gibbs' in my previous comment.

I really liked the story. I liked the ending. Nothing stays the same, even under the best circumstances. I am really glad Team DiNozzo is back on the mend.

WOW!! Harsh but needed, I wonder how much groveling it will take from them to ever get thier jobs back? Or whether Tony will be the "olive branch" between the "enraged father" and the two very naughty childern. Because that is what I think this Ziva and Tim acted like,,, children. and they really do in the show too. I could just So see this happening. Please more soon.

How it should have been - Great Idea really well done

Great story, very well rounded.

Loving this story.