Love this so far. I think the father/son dynamic for Gibbs & Tony is very interesting. I don't get how Tony could be doing so much undercover and obviously getting ill without Gibbs noticing anything. I love that you are working all of the team into the story. I think NCIS has one of the best ensemble cast of characters and love to see them all interact -- for good or bad. The Doctor is an interesting addition. She sounds to be just Gibbs' type, but maybe he gets his taste from his father. There also seems to be a bit of interest between Tony and "Kate" too. Did you mention how old she is? Anyway, please write more soon!!!