Wow! I started to read your story yesterday... and finished it right now.. I'm at a loss for words there... (and that rarely happens) ... You've got an amazing writing style and while I read your story I talked to a friend and was like "I so can see this scene right in front of me" and like "wow you know.. that's SO gibbs / tony / abby / ..." Okay, I guess what I'm trying to say is: Wonderful job and I can't wait for the next chapter.

I loved this!