From start to finish this is a great story! Loved the father/son moments. Very well written! Great job.

An amazing, compelling story, with plenty of emotion and angst and h/c, of course. Very enjoyable, a great weekend read!

Pat, I realized a while back I never left you a comment about this story, and since I was a faithful reader, I thought I should. I am really glad you were able to get back into your account and finish the story first of all. I really like the way you ended it. Though personally I think you should have nailed Vance's ass to the wall. But I can understand why you didn't, for the kids. It was really thoughtful of Tony to think of Vance's kids growing up without a father. Let me know when you write more. I would love to read them. Jackie

i read this entire story in one marathon session and it was brilliant! Thanks so much.

errrr that would be end not ned.

Both sad and happy to get to the ned of this story. Sorry you had computer issues but happy to see so much good stuff to read.