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Title: If the King had run off with Prince Charming... Reviewer: delia cerrano Signed

Good.  Surprising back story for Jethro.    

Date: 03/08/2018 2:20 [Report This]
Title: If the King had run off with Prince Charming... Reviewer: reddragoncrp Signed
I would try to read this but I can't, you REALLY need to double spade between lines. Not, mind you for the same line/paragraph, but certainly with dialog. if you edit this accordingly I would be happy to give it a try.
Date: 12/17/2011 7:07 [Report This]
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