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Title: Epilogue - Through the Years Reviewer: ericj Signed
Decent story but, man, you need a beta. Your punctuation is atrocious. You have some dialog in quotes while other dialog isn't. Some are actual voiced words and some are just internal thoughts. You jump from one person speaking to the next, with one person's dialog in quotes but the other person's isn't. Very difficult to follow and read.
Date: 10/22/2009 22:22 [Report This]
Title: Giving In Reviewer: murgy31 Signed
WOW!!!!!
Date: 08/12/2009 13:13 [Report This]
Title: Working the Case Reviewer: murgy31 Signed
I vote for giving into passion.... Great chapter!
Date: 08/10/2009 18:55 [Report This]
Title: Tony's Story Reviewer: murgy31 Signed
I loved this~! Please update soon...
Date: 08/08/2009 22:26 [Report This]
Title: Jethro's Story Reviewer: murgy31 Signed
I loved this! I can't wait for more...
Date: 08/07/2009 12:59 [Report This]
Title: Working the Case Reviewer: Phoenix414 Signed
Have to say I think a bit of anticipation wouldn't hurt, have them wait until after the case and they've had a bit of time to reflect on that preview. :)
Date: 08/11/2009 8:31 [Report This]
Title: Tony's Story Reviewer: Phoenix414 Signed
Loving this--hope you update soon.
Date: 08/09/2009 12:11 [Report This]
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