Is there more to this story or is this part complete? It's really good so far.

Really enjoyed the story. Hoping to read Tony and Jethro's reunion.

Kath...GREAT STORY I'M REALLY ENJOYING...LOOKING FORWARD TO MORE...THANKS FOR SHARING.

Kath thanks for another great chapter...intriguing twist...can't wait to see where the story goes. Please update soon.

would you please hurry with the next chapter... love it!!! btw would love to see ziva pass a weapon on the sly to sam...

This is so good! More, please!

Sighs blissfully...so worth the wait. I just love this series. Excellent as usual. twi

This just gets better and better. Thanks for the great read.

This story has really captured me. I can not wait to see what happens next. Gibbs vs Sempera, an interesting match indeed. FYI, If you had not told me that English is not your first language I would not have noticed it in your writing. We will have to thank Xanthe for providing us with another excellent storyteller. gentle journey, twi

I am enjoying this story arch and can not wait to see where it goes. Keep up the good work. gentle journey, twi

Loverly story. Tho you wrote it for Xanathe thanks for sharing it with the rest of us.

Oh yeah, I second that! *claps hands* I'm very curious about what's happening next. Please update soon.

I like it â€" I like it a lot! Can’t wait for the next chapter and hope it comes out soon. Keep up the great work.

Great start! Love the way you teased us at the end with a little mystery. Just to reassure you I had no problem with your English. Keep up the good work.

Great start! Love the way you teased us at the end with a little mystery. Just to reassure you I had no problem with your English. Kee up the good work.

I absolutely love this plot! Intriguing so far, thank you so much for sharing :) Hilde